Essay: free outdoor activities for young people
Write an essay using all the notes and give reasons for your point of view. Write 140 to 190 words.
In your English class you have been talking about how young people spend their free time in towns and cities. Now your English teacher has asked you to write an essay. Write an essay using all the notes and give reasons for your point of view.
Should local councils spend more money on free outdoor activities for young people?
Notes
Write about:
1. health
2. the cost to taxpayers
3. ........ (your own idea)- health
- the cost to taxpayers
- your own idea
- a clear opinion with reasons
140–190 words · 40 minutes (our suggestion)
Check your text
- I wrote about both given notes (health and cost) and added a clearly different idea of my own.
- My opinion is clear in the introduction and repeated in the conclusion.
- Each idea has its own paragraph with a reason or example.
- I mention an opposing view and answer it ('Some people argue … However, …').
- I use a neutral or formal style: no contractions such as 'don't', no slang.
- My text has between 140 and 190 words (the official range for this task).
Useful phrases
- In my opinion, … / I firmly believe that …
- The first reason is … / Another important point is …
- Some people argue that … However, …
- in the long run
- This would benefit … because …
- To sum up, although …, I believe …
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Many young people complain that there is nothing to do in their town except sit in cafés or stay at home. Should local councils spend more money on free outdoor activities for them? In my opinion, they should.
The first reason is health. Teenagers today spend hours in front of screens, and many of them hardly exercise at all. If there were free football pitches, climbing walls or fitness classes in local parks, more young people would get into the habit of being active, which would benefit them for the rest of their lives.
Some people argue that taxpayers should not have to pay for teenagers' hobbies, especially when money is short. However, outdoor facilities are relatively cheap to maintain, and healthier young people may cost the health service less in the long run.
Finally, these activities bring people together. Young people from different schools and backgrounds meet, make friends and feel part of their community.
To sum up, although the cost cannot be ignored, I believe free outdoor activities are an investment worth making.
Model answer: 175 words