Essay: free outdoor activities for young people
Write an essay using all the notes and give reasons for your point of view. Write 140 to 190 words.Escribe un ensayo usando todas las notas y justifica tu punto de vista. Escribe entre 140 y 190 palabras.
In your English class you have been talking about how young people spend their free time in towns and cities. Now your English teacher has asked you to write an essay. Write an essay using all the notes and give reasons for your point of view.
En clase de inglés habéis hablado de cómo pasan su tiempo libre los jóvenes en pueblos y ciudades. Escribe un ensayo: ¿deberían los ayuntamientos gastar más dinero en actividades gratuitas al aire libre para jóvenes? Habla de la salud, del coste para los contribuyentes y de una idea propia. Escribe entre 140 y 190 palabras.
Should local councils spend more money on free outdoor activities for young people?
Notes
Write about:
1. health
2. the cost to taxpayers
3. ........ (your own idea)- health
- the cost to taxpayers
- your own idea
- a clear opinion with reasons
140–190 palabras · 40 minutos (nuestra recomendación)
Revisa tu texto
- I wrote about both given notes (health and cost) and added a clearly different idea of my own.He tratado las dos notas dadas (salud y coste) y he añadido una idea propia claramente distinta.
- My opinion is clear in the introduction and repeated in the conclusion.Mi opinión queda clara en la introducción y se repite en la conclusión.
- Each idea has its own paragraph with a reason or example.Cada idea tiene su propio párrafo con una razón o un ejemplo.
- I mention an opposing view and answer it ('Some people argue … However, …').Menciono una opinión contraria y la rebato ('Some people argue … However, …').
- I use a neutral or formal style: no contractions such as 'don't', no slang.Uso un estilo neutro o formal: sin contracciones como 'don't' ni expresiones coloquiales.
- My text has between 140 and 190 words (the official range for this task).Mi texto tiene entre 140 y 190 palabras (el margen oficial de esta tarea).
Expresiones útiles
- In my opinion, … / I firmly believe that …En mi opinión, … / Creo firmemente que …
- The first reason is … / Another important point is …La primera razón es … / Otro punto importante es …
- Some people argue that … However, …Algunos sostienen que … Sin embargo, …
- in the long runa largo plazo
- This would benefit … because …Esto beneficiaría a … porque …
- To sum up, although …, I believe …En resumen, aunque …, creo que …
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Many young people complain that there is nothing to do in their town except sit in cafés or stay at home. Should local councils spend more money on free outdoor activities for them? In my opinion, they should.
The first reason is health. Teenagers today spend hours in front of screens, and many of them hardly exercise at all. If there were free football pitches, climbing walls or fitness classes in local parks, more young people would get into the habit of being active, which would benefit them for the rest of their lives.
Some people argue that taxpayers should not have to pay for teenagers' hobbies, especially when money is short. However, outdoor facilities are relatively cheap to maintain, and healthier young people may cost the health service less in the long run.
Finally, these activities bring people together. Young people from different schools and backgrounds meet, make friends and feel part of their community.
To sum up, although the cost cannot be ignored, I believe free outdoor activities are an investment worth making.
Respuesta modelo: 175 palabras